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Womb With a View

I see the terror in their eyes… of those who seek to paralyze their lives screaming persistent cries of sorrow and grief that belies the turmoil and angst of disguise. I see hunger, the ache within… of those whose vain lot is cast in hardened iron cuffs locked fast in glum humanity's calloused skin oblivious to kith and kin. I see conflict and all-out war amidst communities that are in stiff battle for cross or bar or power or god or dog star, perplexed by illusive devoir. I see a world where I will be forever in a swirling sea of hope and an unanswered plea to God who is said to shield me from all the horror I now see. I only hope when I am born I can survive the world, war-torn, praying peace from the crown of thorn begging any who with me join to comfort others, yet unborn.

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Date: 5/29/2025 2:55:00 PM
There is a lot of deep meanings in your poem I thoroughly enjoy it. Let's hope there are no future wars.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/3/2025 8:34:00 AM
Many thanks Hilda. I always appreciate your visits. :)
Date: 5/25/2025 8:57:00 AM
love the feel of this Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/28/2025 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Annie. So nice of you to visit and comment! )
Date: 5/23/2025 11:23:00 AM
To me, this poem went pow-pow-pow-pow, every line rhyme in every verse intensified the hard-hitting delivery. This poem took talent and time, a commitment to see it through all of which is what someone addicted to poetry does do. Great writing ... CayCay
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/28/2025 11:51:00 AM
Wow CayCay. I am humbled by your words and appreciate your kind comments! Yes, an addiction is an apt description. Thank you! :)
Date: 5/22/2025 3:24:00 AM
Loved your poem from the point of you of an embryo. Well done.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/28/2025 11:49:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor. hugs :)
Date: 5/19/2025 1:35:00 PM
A Fav. Proof you are 100% full proof poet. And human.Sice the world began, war is an ever present. It’s been hell for centuries. The womb for many in unsafe. Especially in America! I tried to start pro-life blogs here, but got nowhere.. I got a big thumbs down. Now we are trying to raise trans children.? Pangie
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/28/2025 11:49:00 AM
Hi my dear friend. a Fav! Wow, I am honored. Thank your for always being there for me. I appreciate your time to read and comment. love and hugs, :)
Date: 5/19/2025 11:05:00 AM
Dear Linda, recently I was about to write a "smile" poem. I had to clear my head of exactly all the things in your heart wrenching poem. Otherwise I would have written a 'crying" poem. You are such a warm hearted lady, and you have written a poem that really brings such feelings to the forefront. So well written my friend.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/28/2025 11:47:00 AM
Hello sweet lady. I have been in a dark mood recently - haven't figured out why, but I promise to be back to my silly self soon. :) Your words are touching and I thank you for commenting Wen. hugs :)
Date: 5/17/2025 2:42:00 PM
Linda, excellent writing, it is sad to think of the world the children are born into, blessing ~
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/17/2025 4:17:00 PM
Thank you dear Constnce. I so appreciate you! :)
Date: 5/17/2025 1:43:00 PM
Thankfully in the womb, one is safe. Still, the world outside has suffering. Still, God wants us and to restore us.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/17/2025 1:50:00 PM
Yes, Kim, safe. Restoration is an honorable and attainable goal. Good to see you today! :)

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