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the sea beckons

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the sea lures me as waves run one after another splashes over the silvery sand and moving shingles slow tide flows inwards holding me in its spell crabs are carried towards the deep salty sea I stand mesmerised listening to its melodious thrill. seagulls invite me I just jump into the sea. Placed 8

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2025 8:13:00 PM

Congrats on placing with this worthy one in Brian's contest

Paige Hind

Date: 3/22/2025 12:42:00 PM

Beautiful short poem - like "moving shingles"

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/17/2025 5:28:00 PM

I love the sea but give me the mountains anytime. A wonderful piece my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2025 2:39:00 PM

Love this one, Victor. I love the sea too

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/17/2025 1:23:00 PM

Seagulls only poop on me. This is Victor Buhagiar's best ink kicking in to gift us with a poetic gem. I enjoyed it much, and very much ... CayCay

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 3/17/2025 1:35:00 PM

Put in black terns instead -))

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/17/2025 10:56:00 AM

Victor, Reading your exceptional poetry is equivalent to catching a deep breath of ocean breeze! The mesmerizing allure of the ocean is so vividly described here. Best for a win

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/17/2025 5:44:00 AM

Victor, I hope you had a nice swim with this one that reads like a good contender to me. There is something about the sea, ocean or a lake that is soothing to the soul. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Maria Williams

Date: 3/17/2025 5:32:00 AM

Dearest Victor,your poem is like a breath of fresh, salty air! The way the poet captures the sea's hypnotic pull is so immersive—it's easy to imagine being right there, feeling the waves and hearing the seagulls. The flow of your words mirrors the rhythm of the tide, It’s a perfect blend of calm and energy, making you want to dive right in...Hugs

Maria Williams
Date: 3/17/2025 5:33:00 AM

Good luck in the contest and a fave

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/17/2025 4:04:00 AM

This is beautiful and peaceful. Nice to read. Have a nice day :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/16/2025 7:53:00 PM

Your wonderfully wrought poem makes me yearn for the beach in summer, Victor! The picture is lovely, too. :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/16/2025 1:57:00 PM

Victor, the sea is mesmerizing, nicely penned. Best of luck in the contest. -hugs

Mike Bayles

Date: 3/16/2025 12:40:00 PM

Great personification of the sea, and so much emotion.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2025 10:11:00 AM

- The waves beckon... and the seagulls invite you ... lovely, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/16/2025 7:36:00 AM

Seeing nature and becoming part of it is exhilarating. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck.

Valsa George

Date: 3/16/2025 6:47:00 AM

Wow... ! This is so beautiful. The charm of the sea and the music of its waves are so inviting. I too have a strong inclination to jump into the lashing waves. All the best in the contest, dear Victor!

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/16/2025 5:42:00 AM

What the heck! Never fear that dip...it is where we started our now legged journey...Love the sea! Swimmers in eternity!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/16/2025 2:24:00 AM

There's no better place to be Victor, it's such a tranquil place where you can indulge in deep thought. Tom