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Never Losing Sight Of You

Never Losing Sight Of You Telescopic moments in full view seen through the senses of a gathering flute I remember the fresh linen scent of water the herbal essence of blossoming trees The way your white beard caressed me, like the whispering winds of, ...slow time Meditative apparatuses, (pause) none only the sound of your breath as you exhaled brought the instrument to life.. As the orbs circled your frame you swirled into oblivion, leaving me sitting there like a wisp of a breeze a tendril of smoke a shred of light I listened to your melody from a bird's eye view floating up, never losing sight of you.

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Date: 1/19/2025 12:31:00 PM
Oh, I love this. God bless you always. love, Gina
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Date: 1/16/2025 8:02:00 PM
Your description sounds like Aldo, love does float through our veins to watch and admire. Blessings my friend
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Date: 1/17/2025 9:12:00 AM
thank you for dropping by Eve, I pray your well and writing poetry still :)
Date: 1/16/2025 10:41:00 AM
WOW!!! What a lovely write you have here. What A Great Ending... Have a fun day writing away..............
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Date: 1/17/2025 9:14:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem Paula, have a great day
Date: 1/16/2025 2:04:00 AM
so romantic and elegant poem, enjoyed
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Date: 1/17/2025 9:15:00 AM
Thanks for your kind visit Yann
Date: 1/15/2025 10:50:00 AM
Musical romantic poem. Nice.
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Date: 1/15/2025 3:29:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit Jay
Date: 1/15/2025 7:55:00 AM
i like the rhythmic flow of your romantic words, vie...stellar write!
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Date: 1/15/2025 3:29:00 PM
glad you enjoyed it Nette
Date: 1/15/2025 5:29:00 AM
Beautifully written and a lovely read, Rose. Have a wonderful day my friend.
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Date: 1/15/2025 3:28:00 PM
Thank you for reading Zyrool
Date: 1/14/2025 1:24:00 PM
Very beautiful Rose….a lovely calming vibe! Debx
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Date: 1/14/2025 6:46:00 PM
thank you for reading and commenting. time is precious so I appreciate !

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