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My take on Love

Love is like a gentle whisper That lingers on the edge of a cool breeze, Unexpectedly, it touches you And slowly caresses its way Through to the depths of your heart with ease, Then boldly slips right into your soul, taking a firm hold. By Zyrool

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/28/2025 6:35:00 PM

Beautiful ending- :)

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/30/2025 9:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paige. Stay Blessed.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2025 2:09:00 AM

To read poems of others is difficult at times, but I lose heart when poets do no respond. See Tommy's blog.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/22/2025 2:22:00 AM

Hello Victor, thanks for dropping by. I am a bit confused to your comment though. Wishing you a wonderful day my poet friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/21/2025 9:00:00 AM

For sure…you have a brush with love, but true love has soul-impact!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/21/2025 9:15:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by, Sue. You’re so right. Sending Blessings your way, my poet friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/21/2025 6:51:00 AM

How beautiful and evocative is your poetic depiction of love poetic soul! So well written and flows just seamlessly! Absolutely loved reading this heartfelt poem especially the line "That lingers on the edge of a cool breeze," that is such a beautiful line! So creative! Love is a beautiful emotion shared between two hearts. Sending you light always!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/21/2025 9:16:00 AM

Thank you for your beautiful words, Ink. They always lift my spirits up. Sending Blessings your way my friend.

Valsa George

Date: 5/20/2025 10:18:00 PM

Love finds its way to our heart even without our knowledge. Only when it has its firm grip that we come to know of it. Beautiful poem, Zyrool.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/21/2025 9:19:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and your support, Valsa. Means a lot. Stay Blessed my friend.

Anne Winter

Date: 5/20/2025 7:33:00 PM

Dear Zyrool, beautifully written! Your poem is absolutely gorgeous! Love it! It's beautifully deep and romantic. Best, Anne

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/21/2025 9:20:00 AM

Hello Anne, thank you so much for your beautiful words, greatly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful day.

Karen Jones

Date: 5/19/2025 5:32:00 AM

Nicely said! Very romantic!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/19/2025 8:07:00 AM

Hello Karen, thank you so much for the read and your kind words. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead my friend.