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contest Ten Lines from Ten Poems sponsor Silent One

When all the poetic themes have been written with a siren's song of sweet haunting beauty would your love know me as a prisoner held in your eyes in a welcomed understanding of quiet wonder and beauty between the breathless dawn of glorious glow where each kiss is a passionate moment in time so we may cross the bridge to our soul that flow from the trembling tremors of each breath and dance with romance beneath stars that sigh two prisoners of love forevermore List of Poems More Perfect than a Da Vinci Angelic Would You Still Love Me Quiver Kiss Forever Fly with me my Love My Soul's Eternal Flame The First Greeting from Your Eyes Romantic Desire

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2024 9:58:00 AM

Sooo romantic. I think you are the only male on the winner list. Big congrats to you.

Silent One

Date: 12/31/2024 8:52:00 AM

Your opening line got to me, as this is a poem that I would write for my beloved also... You are a great romantic poet and write so well on the subject.. each line oozes in love and desire.... It was a really difficult contest to judge and you have done really well putting these ten lines together... Congratulations on your placement...

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/24/2024 10:31:00 AM

Frederic, dear friend dear poet, soul-baring romance and breathless beauty flow flawlessly through the verses perfectly plucked from your ten poems. “Trembling tremors of each breath” - wow! Each line trembles with your famed passionate imagery. Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas, dear friend dear poet, and a very happy new year.. ~Susan

Frederic Parker
Date: 12/24/2024 11:35:00 AM

thank you, Susan, dear friend, dear poet, your kind words know no bounds and bring me a sense of joy...may you and yours have a very Merry Christmas...Frederic