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+ Creator of the footle & hiku (definition -as below)

*FOOTLE (singular)* is,a two line lines,2 syllable verse with an integral title-Light Poetic verse form,witty,pertinent,topical etc (technically a trochaic monometer and not necessarily in rhyme).

+'hiku' explained -I use hiku for the English language free verse thereof to distinguish from translations of the cultural Japanese haiku.

HAIKU is a centuries old Japanese traditional phonetical & cultural poetic form whereas HIKU is a relatively recently reference to the 75year old established haiku in English.

Hiku being an imagist tristich like its elder cousin,without a title,and with a similar economy of words ,inherently enigmatic & with a caesura or an ellipsis and surprise ending. A similar sense of pause the aesthetic insight flowing from perception gained from 'one breath length ' composition that flowed from the Japanesese 17 onji sound inherent in the Japaneses haiku.

Without any syllabic( 5-7-5 ) line restrictions of the haiku in english the hiku is the 'free verse' version of the haiku in English. similar but different ,a present tense poetic in another language - hiku is the written or recited equivalent to arts 'gestural spontaneous happening' . A verse freed from strict syllabic constraint within its triplicity of format& is inherently enigmatic & often with a caesura and surprise ending( VERSUM )to give a 'turning' to the line.

The hiku maybe a horizontal single* line,(often broken line at the caesura),a vertical line(usually a painting(haiga) ,a couplet** or a tristich* with shape-like variations.

Plus * OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

+Gestural abstraction- my art style

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EASTER EXERCISE A-B-C triostic

Blog Posted:4/19/2025 12:09:00 AM

Proverbs 31 has an acrostics to describe the virtuous wife.Create a Triostic using just the first three ( A) (B) (C) in an apt phrase-Do join in.

(brianS) (A)ristole's (B)rilliant (C)oncepts (beataA) (A)lmighty's (B)lessed (C)reation

(sandraH) (A)rise (B)eholding (C)hrist (andreaD) (A)dore (B)lessed (C)hildren

(kimR) (A)bdominal (B)utterflies (C)agey

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MAY MUSE after style of Date Posted: 5/24/2025 12:59:00 AM
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6/4/2025	ALWAYS ON MY MIND	Lyric	love,music,
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4/24/2025	POETRY PARAPHRASE C	Alliteration	poetry,voice,
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4/19/2025	DALI PSEUDO SCAPIGLIATA	Ekphrasis	appreciation,art,
4/19/2025	ART REP-AR-TEE H	Rhyme	appreciation,art,
4/19/2025	CONCRETE SHAPES just my opinion g	Alliteration	appreciation,art,poetry,
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