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ENGLISH OPEN FORM https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/open_a_1727822 POET https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/poetry_is_a_recited_art_1716883

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+ Creator of the footle & hiku (definition -as below)

*FOOTLE (singular)* is,a two line lines,2 syllable verse with an integral title-Light Poetic verse form,witty,pertinent,topical etc (technically a trochaic monometer and not necessarily in rhyme).

+'hiku' explained -I use hiku for the English language free verse thereof to distinguish from translations of the cultural Japanese haiku.

HAIKU is a centuries old Japanese traditional phonetical & cultural poetic form whereas HIKU is a relatively recently reference to the 75year old established ' haiku in English.'

Hiku being an imagist tristich like its elder cousin,without a title,and with a similar economy of words ,inherently enigmatic & with a caesura or an ellipsis and surprise ending. A similar sense of pause the aesthetic insight flowing from perception gained from 'one breath length ' composition that flowed from the Japanesese 17 onji sound inherent in the Japaneses haiku.

Without of the ' invented' syllabic( 5-7-5 ) line restrictions of the ' haiku in english ' the hiku is the 'free verse' version of the 'invented''5/7/5 haiku in English. ..similar but different ,a present tense poetic in another language - hiku is the written or recited equivalent to arts 'gestural spontaneous happening' . A verse freed from strict syllabic constraint within its triplicity of format& is inherently enigmatic & often with a caesura and surprise ending( VERSUM )to give a 'turning' to the line.

The hiku maybe a horizontal single* line,(often broken line at the caesura),a vertical line(usually a painting(haiga) ,a couplet** or a tristich* with shape-like variations.

Plus * OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

MY POETIC BIO

Alliteration,the starting place,

alongside cinquains,

apace in time,crystalline

lanterne and rhyme.

Inspiration drew forth footle

,broken monoku &emagi

for a while short imagist

was my style.

Sequenced longer poems

metamorphose within

this crysallis

changing into ekphrasis.

Open,and free to be,

as you see,

structured prose poetry.

With cadence and pause,

others hear my voice

Open VERSE now this poet’s choice.

4 POETIC TENETS - https://creativepoetics.blogspot.com/

+Gestural abstraction- my art style

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EASTER EXERCISE A-B-C triostic

Blog Posted:4/19/2025 12:09:00 AM

Proverbs 31 has an acrostics to describe the virtuous wife.Create a Triostic using just the first three ( A) (B) (C) in an apt phrase-Do join in.

(brianS) (A)ristole's (B)rilliant (C)oncepts (beataA) (A)lmighty's (B)lessed (C)reation

(sandraH) (A)rise (B)eholding (C)hrist (andreaD) (A)dore (B)lessed (C)hildren

(kimR) (A)bdominal (B)utterflies (C)agey

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SUMMER CVC send-a-soupmail Date Posted: 6/12/2025 2:26:00 AM
SUMMER SIMILE popular phrase Date Posted: 6/11/2025 12:29:00 AM
JUNE JUXTAPOSE oxymoron Date Posted: 6/9/2025 12:29:00 AM
JUNE JINGLE apt ad Date Posted: 6/7/2025 12:43:00 AM
PERSONALISE PENTECOST alliteration Date Posted: 6/3/2025 12:38:00 AM
JUNE JOLLY chiasmus Date Posted: 6/1/2025 2:09:00 AM
A MAY MOTIF flower Date Posted: 5/28/2025 2:50:00 AM
MAY MONOMETER footle Date Posted: 5/26/2025 3:09:00 AM
MAY MUSE after style of Date Posted: 5/24/2025 12:59:00 AM
MAY- METAPHOR defined Date Posted: 5/22/2025 2:04:00 AM
MAY MEMORY in a line Date Posted: 5/21/2025 12:49:00 AM
HAPPY 20TH BIRTHDAY POETRYSOUP Date Posted: 5/19/2025 2:14:00 AM
MAY METER exampled Date Posted: 5/17/2025 8:23:00 AM
MAY MIMESIS interpretative imitation Date Posted: 5/16/2025 8:46:00 AM
(M)AY (M)NEMONIC memory aid Date Posted: 5/14/2025 8:10:00 AM
MAY EXERCISE pronoucement Date Posted: 5/9/2025 1:01:00 AM
SPRING EXERCISE tristich Date Posted: 5/5/2025 12:36:00 AM
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APRIL POETRY EXERCISE crystalline Date Posted: 4/27/2025 1:34:00 AM
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EASTER EXERCISE (B) poiema Date Posted: 4/18/2025 12:14:00 AM
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My Recent Poems

Date Posted	PoemTitle	Form	Categories
6/11/2025	FOOTLE 'E'nd of 'L' ine 'F'orm - 2 forms in one-an innovation	Rhyme	word play,
6/10/2025	T A N K A defined SHOW then TELL	Didactic	appreciation,education,po
6/4/2025	ALWAYS ON MY MIND	Lyric	love,music,
6/3/2025	BEATLES BEGINNINGS	Clerihew	appreciation,music,
5/29/2025	PEOPLE PRESSURE	Ekphrasis	art,
5/26/2025	HIKU and ME -creativity the KEY	Tristich	poetry,
5/24/2025	COLOUR MY MOOD	Verse	art,
5/23/2025	LADY IN GREEN -MACKE	Ekphrasis	appreciation,art,
5/20/2025	NUMBED	Verse	appreciation,word play,
5/20/2025	FUSIONS	Clerihew	appreciation,song,
5/20/2025	KINETICISM	Ekphrasis	appreciation,
5/19/2025	HAPPY BIRTHDAY POETRYSOUP	Clerihew	anniversary,appreciation,
5/19/2025	EURO WINNER	Clerihew	song,
5/15/2025	BUTTERFLY emoji	Clerihew	art,
5/8/2025	V E DAY - EIGHTH of MAY	Footle	anniversary,memory,war,
5/3/2025	EKPHRASIS monostich	Ekphrasis	appreciation,music,
5/2/2025	HIKU and U a poetic observation	Tristich	appreciation,poetry,
4/30/2025	MUSIC CLERIHEW	Clerihew	appreciation,music,
4/29/2025	OPEN A	Verse	word play,
4/28/2025	WISTFUL	Verse	word play,
4/27/2025	FREE VERSE what it is	Didactic	poetry,word play,words,
4/27/2025	MAKIING A GESTURE	Clerihew	art,word play,
4/27/2025	ACRONYM F poetics	Bio	appreciation,poetry,
4/26/2025	ACRONYM E art	Epigram	art,word play,
4/26/2025	POETRY PARAPHRASE E monstich	Alliteration	art,poetry,
4/25/2025	POETRY PARAPHRASE D monostich	Epigram	appreciation,
4/25/2025	ACRONYM D poetry	Epigram	appreciation,poetry,
4/25/2025	PROGRAMMING PIONEER	Clerihew	appreciation,computer,
4/24/2025	POETRY TRIBUTE	Tristich	appreciation,poetry,
4/24/2025	POETIC PERCEPTIONS a contest guide	Didactic	poetry,
4/24/2025	POETRY PARAPHRASE C	Alliteration	poetry,voice,
4/24/2025	ACRONYM distich C	Didactic	business,word play,
4/23/2025	ACRONYM MOTTOS	Tristich	art,philosophy,poetry,
4/23/2025	UKIYO-E SCENES	Ekphrasis	appreciation,art,
4/22/2025	ACRONYM rights-duties IMHO	Didactic	word play,
4/22/2025	CLERIHEW hiroshige	Clerihew	art,
4/22/2025	ACRONYM tristich B	Epigram	appreciation,voice,word p
4/22/2025	POETRY PARAPHRASE B monostich	Alliteration	appreciation,poetry,voice
4/21/2025	ACRONYM tristich A	Bio	word play,
4/21/2025	POETRY PARAPHRASE A monostich	Rhyme	appreciation,poetry,voice
4/20/2025	EASTER EXERCISE just my opinion	Couplet	christian,easter,gospel,
4/19/2025	DALI PSEUDO SCAPIGLIATA	Ekphrasis	appreciation,art,
4/19/2025	ART REP-AR-TEE H	Rhyme	appreciation,art,
4/19/2025	CONCRETE SHAPES just my opinion g	Alliteration	appreciation,art,poetry,
4/18/2025	ART REP-AR-TEE G	Epigram	appreciation,art,
4/18/2025	CAPITALISATON just my opinion f	Alliteration	poetry,voice,
4/17/2025	MUSICAL REP-AR-TEE G	Alliteration	appreciation,ireland,musi
4/17/2025	CLASSICAL just my opinion e	Alliteration	appreciation,music,
4/16/2025	MUSIC REP-AR-TEE monostich F	Alliteration	appreciation,music,
4/16/2025	COUNTRY MUSIC just my opinion d	Alliteration	appreciation,music,
4/15/2025	NARRATIVE	Verse	fantasy,
4/15/2025	MUSIC REP-AR-TEE monostich E	Rhyme	appreciation,music,
4/15/2025	ROCK'N ROLL just my opinon c	Rhyme	appreciation,dance,music,
4/14/2025	ART REPAR-TEE monostich F	Alliteration	art,
4/14/2025	CEASURA just my opinion- b	Epigram	poetry,words,
4/13/2025	ART REP-AR-TEE monostich E	Epigram	art,
4/13/2025	RHETORIC just my opinion a	Alliteration	poetry,voice,word play,
4/12/2025	ART REP-AR -TEE monostich D	Epigram	art,
4/12/2025	CREATIVITY just my opinion Z	Alliteration	creation,giving,inspirati
4/11/2025	ART REP-AR-TEE monstich C	Epigram	art,
4/11/2025	RECITATION just my opinion Y	Alliteration	voice,word play,
4/10/2025	POETIC REP- AR- TEE monstich E	Epigram	poetry,
4/10/2025	CADENCE just my opinion X	Epigram	spoken word,voice,word pl
4/9/2025	POETIC REP-AR-TEE monstich D	Epigram	poetry,word play,
4/9/2025	PROSODY just my opinion W	Alliteration	voice,
4/8/2025	POETRY REP-AR-TEE monostich C	Epigram	poetry,word play,
4/8/2025	ALLITERATION just my opinion V	Alliteration	poetry,remember,repetitio
4/7/2025	C R E A T I V I T Y	Verse	word play,
4/7/2025	POETRY REP-AR-TEE monostich B	Epigram	poetry,
4/7/2025	SYLLABICS just my opinion U	Alliteration	poetry,
4/6/2025	POETRY REP-AR-TEE monostich A	Epigram	poetry,word play,
4/6/2025	LOWER CASIFY just my opinion T	Alliteration	poetry,voice,
4/5/2025	MUSIC REP-AR-TEE monostich D	Epigram	music,
4/5/2025	FORM just my opinion S	Alliteration	poetry,
4/4/2025	MUSIC REP-AR-TEE monostich C	Epigram	music,
4/4/2025	HIKU just my opinion R	Alliteration	imagery,
4/3/2025	WORDPLAY	Rhyme	repetition,word play,
4/3/2025	CLERIHEW galle	Ekphrasis	art,
4/3/2025	MUSIC REP-AR-TEE monostich B	Epigram	music,
4/3/2025	HAIKU just my opinion Q	Alliteration	poetry,
4/2/2025	CLERIHEW hofmann	Ekphrasis	art,
4/2/2025	DIAPASON	Verse	voice,
4/2/2025	MUSIC just my opinion P	Alliteration	music,
4/2/2025	MUSIC REP -AR-TEE monostich A	Epigram	music,
4/1/2025	POETRY just my opinion O	Alliteration	poetry,
4/1/2025	ART REP-ART- EE monostich B	Epigram	art,
4/1/2025	APRIL SYMBOL	Epigram	april,
3/31/2025	KNICK KNACKERY	Verse	senses,
3/31/2025	ART just my opinion N	Alliteration	art,
3/31/2025	ART REP-AR-TEE monstich A	Epigram	art,
3/30/2025	MANIA	Verse	word play,
3/30/2025	CLERIHEW bliss	Clerihew	music,people,
3/30/2025	GREEN LEVY just my opinion M	Alliteration	weather,
3/29/2025	CLERIHEW carl orff	Clerihew	music,
3/29/2025	PATRIARCHALITY just my opinion L	Alliteration	father,prejudice,
3/28/2025	WORDPLAY	Verse	sound,word play,
3/28/2025	SPEECH SONG	Verse	music,
3/28/2025	VERBOSITY just my opinion K	Alliteration	spoken word,voice,
3/27/2025	CONTRIBUTORY CAUSES just my opinion J	Alliteration	history,
3/26/2025	WILL'S WORDS a birthday tribute	Rhyme	birthday,tribute,

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